Key's Keysmashing

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Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!
name: keystrings/perks
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novel: flash forward




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Bumping this because I want to reach my goal of hitting 350 reviews by the end of the year.
name: keystrings/perks
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novel: flash forward




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Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering




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Alright, bumping this again.
name: keystrings/perks
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novel: flash forward




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Can you review these please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 5

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 6

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 7
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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Could you review my work Entry One/?: Little Miss Horror Show
lp was here :)

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"Most opportunities are created by luck. It takes skill to grasp those opportunities and turn it into success." -Technoblade




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@Necromancer14 and @CassieList I'm done with your reviews, so the review place is open again. ^^
name: keystrings/perks
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Can you review my next chapter please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 8
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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@Necromancer14 Finished! I hope that helped!

Review requests are always nice!
name: keystrings/perks
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novel: flash forward




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I would love it if you could review my poem, A reflection of uncertainty.
(It's lgbt-q related, just to be upfront.)
Thanks for considering!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)




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Hello @fraey! Could you please review my new short story?

The Sock That Picked Favorites
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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Forgot to update this, but thank you @whatchamacallit and @Necromancer14 for your requests! Those reviews are now done, so this fort is open for new requests. ^^
name: keystrings/perks
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novel: flash forward




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Hey, hey. Wondering if you could review the first part of my short story - This is my world. For now and forever.
Much appreciated in advance. :-)




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Alright, @shima your review is now finished!

This fort is open yet again. ^^
name: keystrings/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: flash forward




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Hello fraey, could you review my next chapter for the Cosmic Dragon?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 10
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"



Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown