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I don't really know how this works honestly haha. I'm probably over thinking this, but whoever I have to review then just pm me and i'll do it :P. And if you want to review me check http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93378 that out




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Dear alfredsymon,
Your work has been reviewed.It's nice. My work is in the browse column.




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Ali,

What is your piece called? I'll review it, but I can't find it.

Here's the first chapter of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94187
Skittles: Taste the Spectrum

LIZARD!!!!!




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work.php?id=94462

Please check it out, give me a little feedback, maybe like it... :wink: and I'll do the same for you :D
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!


Come check out my new story at topic53543.html




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Done!
work.php?id=94510

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Hey, ShadowVyper,

I wrote a review on this: work.php?id=94510

If you could, I'd love for you to either write a review on Sunshine or Pagan (they're short stories). If you can't find them, I'll try to find you a link or maybe let you see a Google Doc version?
My SPD senses are tingling.




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Hey! Please review my new poem, Symphony :)

work.php?id=94554




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To the next poster, please review my Alexandra - Chapter 1 Revised . Thanks a million!
To alfredsymon, getting ready to read Amber Rise.




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Sorry, I did a review on wrong person but fixed it. Someone please review mine: work.php?id=95202




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Done i have re reviewed your story.
he is my first two chapters of The war of night and day work.php?id=96193
hope you enjoy. :P




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Done!

Please review this next person!

work.php?id=96570
new profile: profile.php?u=36729




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Well this is awkward...I reviewed that piece quite a while ago...but I want to throw mine out there...I know!

To the next reviewer: Please review Hero's work first- work.php?id=96570
and then mine, which is Chapter Three of my story, divided into two parts, which can be found right here...

Part one: www.writerfeed.com/work.php?id=97113
Part two: www.writerfeed.com/work.php?id=97115

If you PM me your link, when you post it on here, I'll review it. That way you'll get two reviews, in exchanged for giving two...yeah, that should work. :D

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]




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Done Shadowviper.

Please review if you can be bothered, it's a long one! work.php?id=97209




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Well, your story is a dot. If you've moved it to a different location I'd be happy to review it but for the next poster:
work.php?id=98716
That's the second chapter. I'd probably advise you to read the first one too but I'm more bothered about the review for the second one as I don't have many on there :D
"We can lick gravity but sometimes the paperwork is overwhelming." ~ Wernher von Braun




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Hiya! This is my first time on this website so please excuse any mistakes...
I started writing this piece as stress release, but I'd be interested to see what anyone else thinks. It does swear a bit, and is intended as an opening chapteer to a longer novel. Thank you for taking the time to read!

work.php?id=98795



I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom