He looked to be about 10 years old. Honesty opened his eyes slowly... gently...
...To find two almost identical twins staring back at him. He only knew that Patton was his father figure, Janus was his "long lost" cousin, and the twins were friends to him. He smiled softly, and seemed to almost radiate with light.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge