Was going to quote the exact section Meshugenah commented on!! <3 Loving each of your poems, but something about #5 is particularly beautiful and haunting. The language in your poetry is just simply breathtaking; you manage to say so much so concisely, which is really an impressive skill. Absolutely love all the nature-themed poetry and can't wait to see more !!
Ooh. I really like the juxtaposition of the warm sun on cool skin in the first stanza. And then the description of the gentleness of the sun in the second.
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"wist how dare you play with my heartstrings like that" ~ winter "wist is in every rp" ~ley “ah yes, fear Wist's smile <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint Pfp is made by Crowesn
These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world. — Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah