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Hello hello! Welcome (back) to YWS and welcome to NaPo too - your poetry is a treat to read, so many inventive images laced together - I love the places where the images seem contradictory and invite the reader to read more deeply. Like the image of the person crawling into bed to hear their partner? breathing, only to find it is not them, but the hum of the furnace. The theme of absence comes up a few different times here, but in quiet and creative ways. poem 26 is a favorite with "no-time / infinitytime"... ah!

Looking forward to reading more, congrats on already hitting 30! And thanks for sharing with all of us too.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return



The idea that a poem was a made thing stayed with me, and I decided then that I wanted to be an artist, not just a diarist. So I put myself through a kind of apprenticeship in writing poetry, and I understood even then that my practice as a poet was deeply related to my reading.
— Edward Hirsch