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tinny
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 11:35 am
tinny says... · Fri Apr 20, 2007 11:35 am
Ooo, I like it! Sometime to do with a pair of red socks that go into a white wash, and make everything go pink! And then the consequences of people going around wearing pink clothes... Hmm, a comedy, a teen one?

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Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:05 pm
BrokenSword says... · Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:05 pm
Hmm...it's hard to say out loud. It kind of sounds like a teenage romance, am I right? It would have to have some interesting cover art for me to check it out.

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Sumi H. Inkblot
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Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:06 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says... · Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:06 pm
A child is born without his legs, and would die except for a excellent midwife.

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Sun Apr 22, 2007 9:52 pm
BrokenSword says... · Sun Apr 22, 2007 9:52 pm
A fantasy set in the middle east? Perhaps a society that lives underwater in the ocean.

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Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:36 pm
Jennafina says... · Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:36 pm
It sounds like a historical fiction about a circus. Even though I've never heard it before, the title sounds a little cliché. If I saw it on a shelf, I'd pick it up, but I'm not sure I'd read it. It would have to depend on the art and thickness.

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Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:51 pm
Twit says... · Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:51 pm
Some evil/great power that has lain dormant for centuries, and has now been awakened. It doesn't have much ooomph to it. I'm not too sure I'd read it.

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Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:44 pm
BrokenSword says... · Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:44 pm
A mentally retarded man who struggles to live a normal life in a prejudiced world.

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Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:12 pm
Twit says... · Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:12 pm
Romance. Gross.

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Sumi H. Inkblot
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:00 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says... · Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:00 pm
Which one?

Warp and Woof. A sci/fi about a werewolf in a ship affected by how close to the moon the ship was. Would I read? Hex ya! :P

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Emerson
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:52 am
Emerson says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:52 am
Much too long. And it tells me nothing about the story, sort of. It gives off a fantasy vibe though.

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Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:08 am
BrokenSword says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:08 am
Ooh, I like it. A murder in a theater, during a performance, either backstage or onstage. Definitely a pick-up.

I'm going to try this title again, because I really do need feedback on it. If romance isn't your thing, please pass it up and wait for the next one. :)

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Emerson
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:23 am
Emerson says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:23 am
sort of a pun on the usual "love at first sight" so it's kind of cute in that respect. but it doesn't roll the same as the phrase it was based off of. but sightless makes me think of a blind person. So perhaps love with a blind person? It just doesn't flow right though...

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Sam
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:47 pm
Sam says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:47 pm
Sounds like a murder mystery, or an extremely embellished home cleaning guide. I'd probably need a cool cover and an interesting synopsis to read it, though- personally, I'm not really into either genre. :wink:

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Emerson
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:02 pm
Emerson says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:02 pm
It's like GI Joe! Sounds like a humorous novel about war, or a communist country, or a mans passion for communism. If it really was a comedy, I'd buy it!

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Sun Apr 29, 2007 1:15 am
Twit says... · Sun Apr 29, 2007 1:15 am
A book about the theatre. Perhaps a secret plot that isn't secret at all, because it's happening right in front of everybody, only they don't see it it's so obvious.

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