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Gwenevire
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:12 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:12 pm
The only one that really calls to me is 5....

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Wolf
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:18 pm
Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:18 pm
I would look at it, definitely. Depends on what it was about though.

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Cpt. Smurf
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:20 pm
Cpt. Smurf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:20 pm
I like it, it sounds fresh and interesting. It reminds me (somewhat obviously) of Stardust, and I liked that - well, the film, anyway.

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Wolf
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:24 pm
Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:24 pm
Awesome! It sounds like a Werewolf book--I'd buy it :D
I think I'll use 'Starlit' for my story then :)

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Gwenevire
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:32 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:32 pm
Its kinda simple I would picture it as one of those teen books.

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Wolf
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:35 pm
Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:35 pm
Sounds very angsty and possible even violently emotional. I would look at it then put it down, unless the back cover was interesting.

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Gwenevire
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:39 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:39 pm
Sounds kinda Gay :P
Bye...

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BigBadBear
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:14 am
BigBadBear says... · Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:14 am
Sounds like a fantasy. Maybe a girl/guy inherits a sword that has 'heavenly' powers or qualities. Probably not something I would pick up.


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Via
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:55 am
Via says... · Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:55 am
Mmm redundant? That's all I can think of, it's always dark at midnight? It just doesn't stick out to me as anything special.


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MadHatter
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:03 am
MadHatter says... · Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:03 am
I like it. Be best for a comedy book dealing with (No duh) winter or something

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Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:46 pm
Twit says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:46 pm
A weird book like the Guide. Lots of random. Possible fantasy.

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Stori
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Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:51 pm
Stori says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:51 pm
Interesting. Maybe a comedy?

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MadHatter
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Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:53 pm
MadHatter says... · Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:53 pm
Maybe a spiritual book of sorts

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Via
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Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:07 am
Via says... · Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:07 am
Teenybopper comedy, geeky kid and a prom. Popular girl, money involved.


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jonny911
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Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:10 am
jonny911 says... · Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:10 am
Something like Freaky Friday, with a prediction or something making things crazy.

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