Hahaha!!! I busted up laughing because of how sad this one girl is. <zelithon> I WONDER WHY NO ONE ELSE BUT US GO ON HERE? <-------- LMFAO!!! i COULD NOT stop laughing!
I liked this if you made it more coherent it would make an amusing monologue please read mine and comment that would make me happy but that's aside from the point. I think if actually written in to a monologue format with a more direct story line it would be performance worthy.
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