Travel writing.

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deklon.lowe
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Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:02 am
deklon.lowe says... · Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:02 am
This was my first attempt at travel writing. It took me around 15-20 mins to complete once i had the base. Im hoping to become a writer somday. And this is homework for my engli0sh language AS. :D So could you please review this? Thank you :)
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Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:11 pm
LookUpThere says... · Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:11 pm
Please just post it on YWS, it hurts my eyes when it opens with Open Office, thanks.
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Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:41 pm
Salma says... · Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:41 pm
:!:
Good job, In which grade are you ?
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:34 am
deklon.lowe says... · Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:34 am
Thanks.
Im in college at the moment. In the uk, so I dont have grades.
Im in the first year doing AS levels.
Im 17 (:
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:10 pm
Salma says... · Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:10 pm
Oh, OK.
silly me; I thought it's high school home work :smt001
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