.........why is this a piece? I don't understand. I mean, I know you want feedback, but this is just your signature, right? Are you trying to do a style of poetry? But this is an acronym......
Honestly, I'm not sure why this is here. Shouldn't it be posted somewhere where you didn't have to pay points? Just because it's so short, and everything...
It just doesn't seem right to me.
But I love the signature! It's very creative. I should try to do that for puppies, or something--I'll have to mull it over for a long time before I decide.
"Ok, Lolpup. You can be a girl worth fighting for." --Pengu
I loved it, it was cute. Unfortunitally, when we did Wizzard week in 4th grade and we picked from the hat for our houses... I was put in Slitherinth... -insert evil laugh here- Maybe I should write one for my house... Hehe. Great job anyway!
The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own. — Rod Serling, Twilight Zone