I guess I'm completely missing the connection between the first frame and the second two? This also needs to be rated, harsh language always needs a rating. Just click on "edit" on your first post in here and it will bring up the edit page and just add a rating.
I think you need to work on your style a little. You keep varying it. Personally, I preferred it without the coloured background. I think it would be better if you either kept it in black and white and added shading to make them stand out a little more or if you coloured it all in. The drawing of the boy in the top frame is good though. I like the detail on his clothes but the sash and the weapon need more work on the shading and I'm still finding it difficult to follow your plot line.
I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live? — Homer Simpson
