It's very cartooney, lol, I like it, lots of colors, very happy pic. The blue flower in the lower right hand corner is very pretty. I like how you seemed to use so many different shades of blue just by darkening the tone of the pencil/pen/paint or whatever you used. The ground could have had some grass, it's not often you see a real flower garden, or flower field without grass in between them--but how often do you see bees smile? XD Well done, I'll be looking for more!
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