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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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I like the second drawing the most. There's a lifelike appearance that shines from her eyes. Good job. :)
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Hey, Flower!

I concur; I like the second one most, because it has emotion on the face. ;)

You should shade your drawings! The sides of the face and the noses would give these depth if they were shaded. The eyes look a little strange to me in all -- I'm not sure if it's how thin the eyebrows are or the lack of eye lashes. The hair could use a bit of deeper shading to contrast as well. :D

Well done -- I really like the second one. :D

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Hey Flower!

I think you have a brilliant talent for drawing and I adore the features of your work. I think I'd have to agree with Juni and say that the second one is my favourite. I think this has a lovely feel to it. The slight smile makes me happy and it's a feel-good thing to look at, so I enjoy it very much.

A little nitpick I have it the features of the nose and "moustache area" (XD) which I have to say I have the same problem with. In your third illustration I feel it lacks realism and perhaps as Juni's suggested a good shade might ripen it up and tone down the nose features.

Saying this, I do think in your second picture you've PERFECTED these features and I have to say it's adorable!

Keep up the fine art!
Ben.



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