Cuuute! Love the giant pen. And the banana. And how this guy needs to lose some weight. Is it okay if I leave one bitty suggestion? Add more contrast between the banana and the outfit. I didn't really spot the banana until later. Besides that, sweet job!
You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things... — Gone With the Wind