Cuuute! Love the giant pen. And the banana. And how this guy needs to lose some weight. Is it okay if I leave one bitty suggestion? Add more contrast between the banana and the outfit. I didn't really spot the banana until later. Besides that, sweet job!
There was nothing he enjoyed more than a good book. He'd wander into the study, take down some leather-bound volume, and eat it. — Terence Brady (dog owner)