Cuuute! Love the giant pen. And the banana. And how this guy needs to lose some weight. Is it okay if I leave one bitty suggestion? Add more contrast between the banana and the outfit. I didn't really spot the banana until later. Besides that, sweet job!
Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality