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This is another doodle that I did where I don't know what I was thinking... lol. I wanted it to look more realistic, but I got bored with it and decided to leave it like this.

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Once again I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS DRAWING I can't wait to see more good job^^ Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey Black Sheep, Gsp again. :)

This is a pretty good drawing. I like abstract type things like this. I did notice a couple of things, though.

1.) The person on the left's hand, (I'm assuming it's a boy?) looks odd. I've heard from a lot of artists that drawing hands is difficult, so I won't grind you out about it.

2.) The girl hasn't got a shadow.

3.)On the girl's right foot, there's a tiny white dot. This is really, really bugging me. Also, her ankles look a bit incomplete, like her feet are hovering an inch underneath her ankles.

Other than these notes, this is a very nice picture. Keep up the good work!

~Gsp.
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This is very nice, really!!!!!!!!!!!! I really love the trees, to me they are very realistic!!!!




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I like this a lot. My only issue is:
1)The boy's shadow is a bit awkward. If you could get rid of the white line it would be perfect




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This is really cleverly done! I did notice, however, that the girl has no shadow?
Apart from that, i like it :) xo



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