Yeah I saw the title "Saving Lilly" and immediately was hooked.You should check out my prologue The Girl with The Cheetah Scar. I'm almost done with the chapter 1 and about to submit it !
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes." — A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett