KJ, that's so adorable. And Kyle and Jon are still getting closer! Kyle is actually starting to feel things that Jon isn't or at least isn't showing that he's feeling! In Ch. it seemed that we were in the point of view of Jon's feelings and in Pro. it seems more like Kyle's, I don't know I could be just making odd conclusions lol.
And I love the ending! Now I have to hurry and read more!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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