Prosthesis #52 /P

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Incandescence
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Sun May 13, 2007 8:12 pm
Incandescence says... · Sun May 13, 2007 8:12 pm
Removed.
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Riedawriter23
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Mon May 14, 2007 4:45 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Mon May 14, 2007 4:45 am
XD, I was wondering what you were getting at for a second. All this toilet talk and I thought to myself...This has to mean something, it has to have a big picture behind it, And it did :). You're so brilliant! Poor Kyle, my stomach is twisting because I have the feeling that we're getting closer and closer to the betrayal. :( The audio clip is loading right now!:) Can't wait to read the next!

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No Idea
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Mon May 14, 2007 10:55 pm
No Idea says... · Mon May 14, 2007 10:55 pm
I havent read it all because I have to go
But I love the start its great :D




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Emerson
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Sat May 26, 2007 11:43 pm
Emerson says... · Sat May 26, 2007 11:43 pm
I honestly have to say I hated this chapter xD Simply because Haaser was saying a whole lot of stuff you said in that thing you sent me, and so the whole time all I could hear was you. I still laughed really hard at the spit joke, though....

Otherwise, good chapter :-D
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The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein