Freedom

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That was...
Amazing.
Really, that was. The imagery was excellent and it flowed sooo well. It had a semi-hidden current of wisdom, but it didn't sound like a lecture.

I don't think you should change a thing about this. It's so good the way it is. I mean, I really, really loved this.
It was whimsical in a calm, knowledgeable way. It's just...I'm speechless. It was excellent.

If it's okay with you, I'm going to print this out (I'll never say I wrote it) and put it on my wall. I just love reading this!

Please, please keep writing!
-Ayra

Konbanwa, scribe-kun!

Very nice work here. I couldn't really see anything wrong with it, but perhaps it is my unpolished eye. ^_^

Very enjoyable to read, very inspirational. I would enjoy reading more writing like this. Good job. ^_^ \

Sachiko

Short and juicy. The imagery brings some concrete footing to an otherwise abstract topic.

The daughters of Zeus may be too fickle to love or trust.

Truly beautiful, and--best of all--only one of the stunning lines found herein. Morrow said it best, I think. ^^

I simply loved it!!!
It was wonderfull!!!
and it's so true!!!
it´s awesome!!!
You should go on writing things like this
it's amazing
realy!!!!
you rock man!!!!