The Person Below ya! (TPBM)

Got a poem or short story you want me to critique?

There is only one success: to be able to spend your life in your own way, and not to give others absurd maddening claims upon it. (C D Morley)

Mah name is jiggleh. And I like to jiggle.

"Indecision and terror, thy name is novel." - Chiko

so give me all your poison,
and give me all your pills,
if this is what you want then
FIRE AT WILL

so give me all your poison,
and give me all your pills,
if this is what you want then
FIRE AT WILL

Adults are just obsolete children, and to hell with them!
-Dr.Suess

Deadpanners are backtalkers!

badonkadonk
Atheism is a non phophet organisation

Mah name is jiggleh. And I like to jiggle.

"Indecision and terror, thy name is novel." - Chiko

so give me all your poison,
and give me all your pills,
if this is what you want then
FIRE AT WILL