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Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am
Sonder says... · Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am
crossing thresholds-
(this world is wide and wonderful)

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Goal: 30 poems by the end of the month. Preferably, one per day. Comments welcome, but conversations are for walls/ PMs. Thanks for reading!
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Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am
Sonder says... · Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am
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Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am
Sonder says... · Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am
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Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am
alliyah says... · Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am
Sonder! I really like these first two pieces. Your formatting is so neat and polished and the word choice is somehow just the right blend of academic/scientific and poetic.

This phrasing was beautiful:
"you gesture vaguely to the turbid galaxies roiling above overwhelmed"
I love how nonchalant that is and yet the turn to "overwhelmed" at the end.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
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Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am
Sonder says... · Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am
Sonder says... · Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 6:12 pm
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Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:22 pm
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Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am
Sonder says... · Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am
Sonder says... · Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am
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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:21 am
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Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:41 am
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:35 pm
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:10 pm
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:27 am
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You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh