Sound, I think I'm just now having a chance to read through your NaPo thread additions and you have some really wonderful pieces here. I'm especially a fan of seven, ten, sixteen, nineteen, twenty-three and twenty-four! Even some of those short ones really pack a punch. You are really good at taking a very specific feeling and describing it in an original/imaginative way. And there are just some great lines all around - like the idea of dna circling around the universe, or pinching your nose to drown out the sound of rain!
Thanks for sharing your poetry! I'm excited to continue following what you write.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius. — Aristotle, Poetics
