I think that the lyrics would make a good song... I'm not so sure about the number of the times you repeat "We're just like you" but otherwise... I don't know if you've put it to music yet but you should definitely try.
If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term. — Frinderman
