Iced Petals

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MadameLuxestrange
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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:53 am
MadameLuxestrange says... · Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:53 am
Hiya Raz! Luxy here. I seriously couldn't find anything to rip to shreds that hasn't already been pointed out in the above reviews. I loved this! I wish I could hear the music to go with it!
This was great!
Luxy :D
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harshita3chaarag
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Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:46 am
harshita3chaarag says... · Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:46 am
Wonderful...!!! I just loved it!!! Let me know when it comes out on a record Album....:D
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pazey13
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:03 am
pazey13 says... · Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:03 am
This was really good! If it was a song on the radio, I would actually listen to it! You should put it on youtube. I would love to hear it! :)
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nicolerosebieber
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Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:33 pm
nicolerosebieber says... · Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:33 pm
dude you should go pro!!!!!!!!!! I totally loved this song. I am your #1 fan! you should like post a video. it is SO amazing. think of all the downloads you could get off this song :)
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KEMPTON
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Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:01 pm
KEMPTON says... · Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:01 pm
looks like some carefully selected words in the first few stanzas, they seem to fit just right. These lyrics make me feel a sense of progression, I could see these lyrics working with an upbeat backdrop of music.

good stuff!
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