This actually relates to my feeling right now because I just poested my first story and since I am new I don't think anyone will review it, But what a nice twist on a classic spongebob moment, I don't like how at the end all you added was lala you could have made up something more clever.
F= Finally finishing something!! and not giving up U= U liked it!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPYYYYY!!!!!! N= Now, I guess I'll move on to reading and writing other stuffs :p Thats fun for me.
F is for fandom that spreads through the whole site,
U is for update daily,
N is the newbies we welcome every day, down here on Writers Society!
F is for freaking writers block,
U is for underlying pain!
N is for never receiving reviews, when you're-
F is for friends you meet on the whole site.
U is for understanding, TRY IT!
N is for new young writers, down here on Writers Society.
F is for fantastic stories,
U is for you helping me.
N is for Nate and his amazing writing site,
and writing with my best buddies!
Lala lala la la
Lala lala la la
Lala lala la-
Down here on Writers Society!
Yeah... Sorry for filling the comment with quotes from your story. I just don't have much to review. When I like something, I like something. When I don't like something, I don't like something. As simple as that. I liked it.
Like a dragon, I'll spread my wings and fly. Fly far away from this hatred planet and fly somewhere deep, where I shall be alone. My imagination is paradise.
Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses. — Ann Landers
cute very cute 
