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aouther2b
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:23 am
aouther2b says... · Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:23 am
I loved the review you did on another piece of mine, would you mind ever so terribly reviewing another piece??

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JohnLocke1
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:52 am
JohnLocke1 says... · Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:52 am
I would love it if you would review this. It's fantasy, but I hope that is alright!

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"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke




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Dreamwalker
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:04 am
Dreamwalker says... · Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:04 am
Alright, finished aouther2b's. Now, onto JohnLocke1's.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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CinnaThePoet
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Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:28 pm
CinnaThePoet says... · Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:28 pm
Hi Walker, I would really appreciate if you could review this. Please and thank you :)

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Dreamwalker
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Fri May 01, 2015 4:30 am
Dreamwalker says... · Fri May 01, 2015 4:30 am
Re-opened
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Daisuki
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Reviews 141
Fri May 01, 2015 4:36 pm
Daisuki says... · Fri May 01, 2015 4:36 pm
Is this really true!? *checks date*
I can't pass this up!
with respect to distant stars
Oh, I wish I was punk-rocker with flowers in my hair.




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Dreamwalker
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Fri May 01, 2015 5:42 pm
Dreamwalker says... · Fri May 01, 2015 5:42 pm
Daisuki wrote:Is this really true!? *checks date*
I can't pass this up!
with respect to distant stars


Definitely true and definitely done, m'dear ;)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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paula08
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Sun May 24, 2015 6:21 pm
paula08 says... · Sun May 24, 2015 6:21 pm
Hi Dreamwalker, can you review this poem for me please? I would really appreciate it.

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Dreamwalker
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Wed May 27, 2015 1:36 am
Dreamwalker says... · Wed May 27, 2015 1:36 am
All done, paula08!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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artybirdy
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Wed May 27, 2015 2:42 am
artybirdy says... · Wed May 27, 2015 2:42 am
I posted the poem in 2013, but recently edited it completely. Can you review it for me?

To The One I Love(d)

Thanks!
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Dreamwalker
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Sun May 31, 2015 2:16 am
Dreamwalker says... · Sun May 31, 2015 2:16 am
Sorry for the late review on that! It is, however, all done.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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artybirdy
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:50 am
artybirdy says... · Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:50 am
Can I request another review?

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Dreamwalker
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 1:52 pm
Dreamwalker says... · Mon Jun 08, 2015 1:52 pm
Certainly! What would you like reviewed?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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artybirdy
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 6:45 pm
artybirdy says... · Mon Jun 08, 2015 6:45 pm
Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE.

Thanks!

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Dreamwalker
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Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:22 pm
Dreamwalker says... · Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:22 pm
Re-opened fam. Hit me up while supplies last.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S

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He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart