I have been reading a few of your reviews and I have to say I like what I see. (I'm a picky reviewer myself as well). I noticed you said that you review individual chapters. Not many reviewers are willing to do that. I posted Ch.9 from my novel about 2 weeks ago and I haven't got any feedback on it yet. Would you take a look at it for me? (I added a very brief plot summary at the beginning).
Being a hero doesn't mean you're invincible. It just means that you're brave enough to stand up and do what's needed. — Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena