Hello, Laure. Could you please review on my narrative/mystery novel? I've only posted the first chapter though-- I'm so insecure of posting the rest. A few reviewers have helped me out a lot, and even after I've fixed it up, i still feel as though it needs some repairing. So please check it out : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110735 Thank you.
Hi Laure! Would you mind taking a look at a chapter of mine? It is the second chapter, but you have reviewed the first when I origianlly published it, and I feel like I need some more feedback on it, especially plotwise. Be as harsh as you like! Thank you!
You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it. — Aldous Huxley, Brave New World
