Hey Meg. Would you be available to review my edited chapter 1( link: What Could Not Be (Chapter 1) *EDITED*). It would be great if you could just to see if ive made a big improvement from the original.
I have a multi-part short story that I'd like reviewed ^~^ I'd definitely like the second part done, but if you aren't too busy could you also do the first one?
That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them. — Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)
