I have reviewed Chapter One (Not sure of the title yet =P) at long last. Sorry it took me so long. Have a great day and thanks for requesting a review from the dragon.
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller
~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~ - Bill Cosby
Hello, I would like a review on my latest chapter. Honestly speaking, i'm not really interested in grammar reviews. I want the real deal; an actually review where you can tell me if my writing sucks or not. I need it. Thanks in advance
“Rise like Lions after slumber
In unvanquishable number.
Shake your chains to earth like dew
Which in sleep had fallen on you—
Ye are many—they are few.” — Mary Shelly