This Lady Needs Some Food!

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WELCOME WELCOME!


Categories I will review:
1. Novels/Chapters
2. Short Stories
3. Fanfiction
4. Poetry
5. Articles

I will try my best to read and review articles, cause I am usually not the one who likes to read about debates (For example: Politics.)
With poetry, I will try to review those also, reviewing poetry is not my best forte.

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PROTECTOR OF LIGHT
Knight of the Green Room




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Hi!!!
Could you please review this for me?

The Funeral and/or the Fighter and the Dragon
Suggestions, literally anything. Nitpick it.
Novel/chapter and short story
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.




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Hi Kanome

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition




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Hi Kanome

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition




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Hey there, Kanome! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



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