Rydia's Reviews

Since you said you liked the last three chapters, here's chapter 4:

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HAHAHAHA!!! I'll give you some links, but only because I want you to get that star... very very badly.

Anyways, if you get around to these that would be great but don't burn yourself out!

Chapter 1 and Chapter 2! thanx

You deserve another star, so here's my contribution to the pile:

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Good luck!


*adna*

Hi,
You could critc my work. I really need someone to fix up my grammar.

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I'm not sure if that will work. If not it's called Diary, EDITED. Under non-fiction.

-steph

...and chapter 5:

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You so deserve another star, Heather! So I thought I'd come and badger you:

Alphess: part one.

I could really use an opinion on "The Monster":

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I've got another one for you, chapter 6:

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Cat, let me know when you have those chapters back up and I'll critique them for you.


Only three more on the list now which might just last me tomorrow but I'll need others so feel free to add a link or two.

Please could you critique my poem for meee?

Anniversay; Ginge's poem

Oh, and could I post some links of another person's piece? I'm really raving over her story, but I don't think she's got the amount of reviews and praise that she deserves.

:3

Her Prologue
Chapter one; Part one
Chapter one; Part two

Thought I'd help out two people at the same time :3
Hope I don't seem cheeky.

Ginge

You've let me run out of things to critique...

Lol. I need to get some sleep anyway but make sure I have a few more by tomorrow. Still 39 before I reach the next star and I may go for another after that.

^_^ Taking a break while DoaV skills come to me, and typing up a story from earlier this year. It's a romance, and needs all the love it can get.

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^_^ Thank you!

I can fix that! Here's my neglected story:

Circus Pirates 1

Circus Pirates 2

Good luck, and thanks!

~Yoyo

> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red Flame