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Aedomir
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:10 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:10 pm
:twisted:

me wants blue star!

If you need a crit on anything, post a link here. I will pretty bogged down with homework for about 2 days, but I should hopefully be a lot better after that.

I want 35O reviews!
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We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.




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JFW1415
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:42 pm
JFW1415 says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:42 pm
I'd love it if you reviewd any of my work. :P All Eyes On Us needs some help...

~JFW1415




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Aedomir
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:43 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:43 pm
I'll get to it :-)
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.




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Autumn
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:50 pm
Autumn says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:50 pm
if you get an chance i'd appreciate a review of this :) >
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But there's still tomorrow
Forget the sorrow
And I can be on the last train home




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Wolf
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:31 pm
Wolf says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:31 pm
> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red flame

It's very rough. Heh.

Thanks! =)
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became everything i lost.

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html




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Maki-Chan
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:49 pm
Maki-Chan says... · Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:49 pm
Umm do you know about Naruto? Cause I have a fan-fiction about it. Its called Wind Demon. Please look at it. Tell me what you think of it.
check out my deviantart account ^_^
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GingerLizzy
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:36 pm
GingerLizzy says... · Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:36 pm
Glass Eyes

I'd be much obliged if you critiqued my poem; see if you can guess what it's about. If you need any reviews, just post them in my "Offering Ginger Critiques" threads, and I'll jump to them.

:3
Worship the ginger monkey :) aaand join my new group!

Oh, and enter my new contest!




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Prokaryote
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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:16 am
Prokaryote says... · Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:16 am
Assuming you're still doing this, you can review Crocodile Teeth.

Thanks!

Prokaryote




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chocoholic
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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:38 am
chocoholic says... · Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:38 am
I'm trying to get a blue star as well!

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topic27483.html

I'd love a crit on these two!
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*




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Aedomir
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:48 pm
Aedomir says... · Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:48 pm
Gah! I forgot about th is thread!

I will get to them!
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.




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Wolf
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:36 pm
Wolf says... · Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:36 pm
This thread seems pretty dead...
... it's time I brought it back to life! :twisted:

(RUNAWAY) Chapter One: paralyzed [Part One]

Thanks Aedomir! :D

- Camille xx
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html




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aestar101
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Wed Apr 30, 2008 12:26 am
aestar101 says... · Wed Apr 30, 2008 12:26 am
I have a poem thats need more reviewing: topic29375.html
Character is what you have left when you've lost everything you can lose. - Evan Esar
Like my opinions a lot? Let me critique you. topic29146.html




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JFW1415
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Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:20 pm
JFW1415 says... · Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:20 pm
Here's what I was talking about (I posted it earlier than I planned.)

Part One
Part Two

And I'm reading yours now! :wink:

~JFW1415




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OverEasy
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Fri May 02, 2008 12:48 am
OverEasy says... · Fri May 02, 2008 12:48 am
Hello!


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Please and Thank You

OverEasy
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thewritingdoc
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Sun May 04, 2008 7:50 pm
thewritingdoc says... · Sun May 04, 2008 7:50 pm
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It's a short story..

I have very few reviews and I posted about a week or so ago...

i need all the help i can get with it as I'm sending bits of it in to an author friend of mine soon and then he'll see what he can do.

Thanks so much if you could get to it.
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    and I'd rather play music all day
    and read and wander around bookstores
    and watch humans
    but not be one of them.

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For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle