get help! Need critques?

Ok this is a post your needing to critques or your wanting a good story offer.

Ether say what's a good story and post a link or post a link and say you want critques.

I my self have had my fair share of hard times so...ya.

There you go.

*moved to Will Review for Food*


You may also consider using proper grammar and spelling in your post. If you're offering to critique, it's probably best to look like you know how to write.

I have a poem thats need more reviewing: topic29375.html

Thanks Suzzan I finally founded in thanks to you.

I reveiwed it. Verylong but great job.

I'm soo hungry! Feed me!

I wouldn't mind another review on Sirens' Symphony seen as you appear to be so desperate

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