Could you review the short story in my sig? It's a bit unsettling, but it's supposed to be accurate portrayal of someone who's living with Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder.
I'd really like advice on whether or not I'm getting the right emotions across, and whether or not it goes at a good pace. But other than that I'd love comments on anything.
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties. — Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians
