I shalt ask thee these questions three: Can thou review this piece, please. Can thou help me to make this piece better. And can thou review the other capters ???
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better. -Giuseppe Verdi-
If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you don't want to review each and every part of it, I understand.
“Rise like Lions after slumber
In unvanquishable number.
Shake your chains to earth like dew
Which in sleep had fallen on you—
Ye are many—they are few.” — Mary Shelly
