If you could please take a gander at the third and fourth of my Vicissitudes story...they're not chapters in a novel, but interconnected stories, so you don't need to do them with order (well, I hope not).
The first in what will be a long story, split into parts for the viewing ease of all. If you don't want to review each part, that's okay. I will tell you though that characters from other stories I have written will be making appearances in it.
I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use". — Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear
