Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
I'm going off on a bit of a critique craze this weekend, so if you apply now, they'll all get done instantaneously.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Will her excellency be delighted in reading a new story of mine. Oh, and I bought a gift for your table. It is posted in Romantic Fiction and is called Eternal Sunshine. I hope you enjoy it.
Angel, the Queen will work on your story of Eternal Sunshine with pleasure.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Hey! I wrote this a while ago, and I realized I should probably work on it, and continue, It has a few helpful critiques, but I would love another angle to get an idea on what I want to work on.
Title- Tamia's Quest (rewritten)
Genre- Fantasy Fiction
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Thanks ^^
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Could you go over this for me? Be aware it's part three, and it *may* be helpful if you quickly read one and two, (both short and don't need crits) but you don't have to. It should make okay sense on its own.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term. — Frinderman
