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Threnody
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:44 pm
Threnody says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:44 pm
Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

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Thanks again!

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Storm_Bringer
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:40 pm
Storm_Bringer says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:40 pm
Done with yours. Nice poem. :wink:

Anyone else?

*walks away muttering something about all the purples around my lonely little thread...*
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Samantha Eliza
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:34 am
Samantha Eliza says... · Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:34 am
An Inch from Perfect - I've put it in Other Fiction, but I suppose it could qualify as romance. I'd appreciate anything that you have to say on it; I just want to know how to make it better. Thanks so much in advance!
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Storm_Bringer
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:37 pm
Storm_Bringer says... · Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:37 pm
Done with yours!!!

More, please? :D
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Storm_Bringer
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Mon May 04, 2009 1:28 am
Storm_Bringer says... · Mon May 04, 2009 1:28 am
Anyone else???
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Chloe(:
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Fri May 08, 2009 7:23 pm
Chloe(: says... · Fri May 08, 2009 7:23 pm
Can you take a look at this?
Formerly known as Vivacious.

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Storm_Bringer
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Sat May 09, 2009 5:39 am
Storm_Bringer says... · Sat May 09, 2009 5:39 am
Done, Vivacious!

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Storm_Bringer
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Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 pm
Storm_Bringer says... · Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 pm
Come on, you know you want one~
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Rascalover
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Fri May 22, 2009 11:06 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri May 22, 2009 11:06 pm
Can you please review my romantic fiction piece titled Let Me Love You

topic48315.html

please and thank you

-Tiffany :)
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WritersBlock247
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Sun May 24, 2009 9:46 pm
WritersBlock247 says... · Sun May 24, 2009 9:46 pm
hi, I'm looking for a pretty brutal review for this piece cuz I like it alot


Unsolved Mystery
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Storm_Bringer
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Sun May 24, 2009 11:05 pm
Storm_Bringer says... · Sun May 24, 2009 11:05 pm
Done with yours Writers Block!

Getting to the others!

Sorry I'm so slow lately, school and the end of the year homework has been a hassle! Again, Sorry!
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imapoemperson
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:21 am
imapoemperson says... · Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:21 am
Title:Struck Sightless-Chapter one
Genre:other Fiction
Link:http://www.writerfeed.com/topic52513.html

There is a prologue before the story, but please don't review the prologue...you can read it though. ^^
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Pretty Crazy
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Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:10 pm
Pretty Crazy says... · Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:10 pm
Alright you asked for it!
I'd appreciate it if you'd review this:
Title: Mission Zero part 4
Genre: Action/adventure fiction
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There is parts 1-3 so yeah, it might help to read those.
Thanks :smt001
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Storm_Bringer
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:35 pm
Storm_Bringer says... · Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:35 pm
Done & Done!

Keep them coming 'cause I'm back!

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Young gun
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:46 pm
Young gun says... · Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:46 pm
I would really appreciate if you could review this.It dint do as well as its first version.

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title:Strange love III-The butterfly effct

Thanks.
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