Hey Spike. ^_^ This 'Will Review for Food' section is where different people offer their critiquing services, so that they each have their own little business thread. If you would like to request a critique from someone, please reply in their specific thread with the link, like you did in lilymoore's thread.
Thank you!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. — Neil Gaiman
