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Hi. Can you review this for me? It's the prologue and chapter-1 of the same story.
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A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
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Reviewed the Prologue! Hopefully, I will get around to chapter 1 later this week. :wink:
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Hey WD, can you review this for me? I just fixed it up and hope it's a bit better.

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Hey WD! :)

Could you please review my Fantasy Fiction? post684008.html#p684008
Take your time, and thanks in advance!

xoxo Skins
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WD!

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Can you do this for me? Thanks.

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Thanks for the review WD! :D

I don't want to seem rude, but could you review something else for me? Pretty please?

Your last review was really helpful, so I thought if I asked kindly enough, you might do me another one?

It's the next part of the one you've already reviewed. I don't think it's as good though at all, I need some help telling me what needs to be improved! I've probably done the same mistakes as I did in the first one as well, knowing me.

Here it is

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Thanks again WD! :)

Annabel is actually a ghost, by the way. All of that gets explained in the first chapter! But your hallucination comment has actually given me and idea... :wink:

xoxo Skins
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