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It has no connection whatsoever :D

Actually, that's not true. I do like Oliver the movie and musical... Plus, I just like the name Oliver, especially with Ollie as a nickname. If I can't think of well suited name's for my characters, I tend to name them based on name's I like. I'm sad like that.
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Oh, and I've finished all reviews now!

Anyone else? :smt001
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Hey Skins, long time no see/begging for reviews :)

I doubt you'll remember, but a long time ago, you reviewed something of mine at the time called "The Battle".

It now has a proper title and is the Prologue to a novel I'm co-writing with my sister, called Reprisal.

I was wondering if you could re-review it [link above](as it's changed by a huge amount), and possibly have a look at Chapter One as well (in your spare time, of course).

If the posts are too long, definitely don't feel obliged to review - I'm sure someone else deserves the reviews more than me anyway :P

Thanks,
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Hello! Me agian! I liked your reviews so thought I'd ask you to review another poem of mine... topic69314.html
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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Aaaaalll done! :smt003

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Hey Skins!

So I wrote a short story for the week long contest and was wondering if you would review it for me! Here's the link:

topic69431.html

Please and thank you!
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Yours is done, HomelessPorcupine 8)

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Hey, Can you review my short story, [September Contest] It's What I Do? Thanksies!
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I've finished yours, Ultra!

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Whatssup Skinny Skins!

Will you review my short poem? I would really appreciate some comments or harsh feedbacks on it.

Here is the magical link-ie: post763029.html#p763029

Thanks in advance! :3
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal




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I've finished your review, Yuri 8)

Anymore takers...?
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Hi, Skins! Me again. :smt003 Mind checking this poem out for me? Thanks!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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I've finished your, blackbird. Another epic poem. ;)

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Hey Skins!

I finally finished that poem and short story I've been promising! Links:

Story: topic69639.html

Poem: topic69633.html

:) Thanks!
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Hey there Skins! :]
I like you to review the first [ prologue part 1 ] (hah! xD) for me, thanks!

Prologue Part 1: topic69502.html
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.



You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
— GengarTheGhost