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Kamas
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:37 am
Kamas says... · Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:37 am
Will review:

Any poetry
Artwork
Photography

Will not review:

Anything prose.

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If you post a link, would be great. I'm not the kindest reviewer, but I'll try my best to offer the most constructive criticism possible. : )

Reviews that are done:

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Persephone's Daughter - Elinor Brynn
Heliokinesis - Kyllorac
Dark - SilentRain
wristbiter - blackbird18
brushstrokes - blackbird18
Goodbye Mom - Flower~Child
Sorry, Songbird - The.Dreamwalker
Arachnophobia - Persephoneia
M-I-M - carbonCore
Behind the Cloud of Dreams - ehte92


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Elinor
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:18 am
Elinor says... · Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:18 am
Hey Kamas. :D

Can you take a look at this poem for me? Thanks much. ^^

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.
-- Walt Disney




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Kale
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:45 pm
Kale says... · Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:45 pm
Mon ami, ce poème, s'il vous plaît.

(And I apologize for my flagrant abuse of the French language.)
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There are no chickens in Hyrule.
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SilentRain
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:11 am
SilentRain says... · Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:11 am
Hello!

This is Rain
This is a poem topic71777.html
and this is its name- Dark

and this--> is me saying thank you

Thanks!!

~Rain~

And now good-bye!
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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blackbird12
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Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:56 pm
blackbird12 says... · Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:56 pm
Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic72396.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver




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Flower~Child
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Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:35 am
Flower~Child says... · Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:35 am
Will you review my poem?

topic72411.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Kamas
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Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:36 am
Kamas says... · Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:36 am
Done everyone, except you Flower. I'll get to yours as soon as I can.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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blackbird12
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Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:45 pm
blackbird12 says... · Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:45 pm
Hey there, me again! Would you mind reviewing another poem for me? Thanks!

topic72468.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver




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Kamas
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Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:44 pm
Kamas says... · Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:44 pm
Done!
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Lumi
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Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:23 pm
Lumi says... · Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:23 pm
Hey Commas! If you get a chance, maybe you could take a crack at Ivy Rose?

Thanks in advance! ;)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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blackbird12
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Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:18 pm
blackbird12 says... · Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:18 pm
Hey there, Kamas! Would you mind taking a look at another poem for me? Thanks.

topic72796.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver




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lilymoore
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Sun Dec 05, 2010 7:54 pm
lilymoore says... · Sun Dec 05, 2010 7:54 pm
Wow, it has been a long time since I ended up in this forum. Like...a long time. Anyways, Kams, do you think you could take a look at this poem for me pretty pleeease. ^^

I might just have to set up a new WRFF too since I'm here.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Kamas
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:18 pm
Kamas says... · Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:18 pm
Eep! Haven't check this in a while! I'll get to these as quickly as possible.
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Button
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:38 pm
Button says... · Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:38 pm
Hi there :)

If you have a bit of extra time, would you mind looking at this, please?

topic73112.html


Thanks so much!

-Coral-




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Kamas
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:43 pm
Kamas says... · Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:43 pm
I haven't really looked at this, closed until I can get to all the reviews I owe.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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