Will review almost anything!

Idraax · 2010-10-26T18:42:13Z

Hi, I'm new here and thought this would be a good idea to see what's out there. I'll review almost anything, except whole novels and things that fit under the Romance forum. I don't mind a little romance, but not if your whole story's about it. I think I'm better at reviewing nonfiction works because I'm a college student and I'm writing a lot of papers myself, so I kind of know what teachers want. Here are some samples of my critiques. I try to be really through. I apologize if it takes a while for me to get back to you. I'll try to be quick, but I have classes to go to and papers to write. I will send you a message saying that I'm looking at your work and am in the process of giving you a review. I don't want food, but I would like it if you could review any of my work. For my novel, I have summaries of the preceding chapters, so you don't really have to read them. It doesn't have to be in-depth, just let me know what you thought about it. Although, you don't have to. Thank you and I look forward to seeing your work! :D http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post778186.html#p778186 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post777370.html#p777370 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post777853.html#p777853 My work(please read the note first before you start, if you're doing chapter one of the novel) You can rewiew either of these if you want. The second link's a little shorter. The first links to my novel. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=731 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71210

Sins

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Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:22 pm

Sins says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:22 pm

Heya idraax

Would you mind reviewing a short story for me? I wrote it for a contest and I don't like it much, so I need some advice to help me improve it. It's not long at all really.

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Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:27 pm

Idraax says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:27 pm

Yes! Yes! Yes! A review request! I will do it this evening, because I have class in half an hour.

Thank you for the request!

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Idraax

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Wed Nov 10, 2010 11:08 pm

Idraax says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 11:08 pm

Skins!! Your review is done! I hope it helped. Thai you for the request! Any one else have any?

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LittlePrincess

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Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:34 am

LittlePrincess says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:34 am

Hi I just have a little poem I wrote. I'm trying my hand out at poetry, tell me what you think!

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"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
The Little Prince

Idraax

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Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:11 am

Idraax says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:11 am

Ok, I will do your's tomorrow morning.

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Alezrani
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Idraax

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Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:43 pm

Idraax says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:43 pm

Little Princess, your review is done! Anyone else have any requests?

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Alezrani
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Idraax

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Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 pm

Idraax says... · Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 pm

Give meeeee requeeeeests! I live off them!

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Alezrani
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Winchester

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Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:15 pm

Winchester says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:15 pm

The Doctor Who Thing!

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"Winner, winner, chicken dinner" Wise words said by the one and only, Dean Winchester.

Idraax

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Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:22 pm

Idraax says... · Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:22 pm

Yay! I haven't watched all the seasons, so I won't be able to tell you if it fit's cannon or not. But I can let you know how the characterization. I will review this as soon as I get my Phil paper done.

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Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:06 pm

MiaParamore says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:06 pm

Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.

~Shubhi

"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore

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Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:51 pm

Idraax says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:51 pm

Shubhi, I will review yours first since you have a deadline. Ger, I will get to yours as soon as I'm done with Shubhi's. Sorry for the long wait...

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Alezrani
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Idraax

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Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:33 pm

Idraax says... · Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:33 pm

Shubhi! Your review is done. I hope I helped. Good luck with the contest.

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Alezrani
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Idraax

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Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:53 pm

Idraax says... · Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:53 pm

Geronimo, you gave me the wrong link.

I still reviewed it anyway though. Who's next!

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Alezrani
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Idraax

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Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:35 pm

Idraax says... · Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:35 pm

give me requests please!

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Alezrani
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ErBear

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Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:21 am

ErBear says... · Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:21 am

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Thanks!!

~formerly Ilovebubbles123

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to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.

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