I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Would you mind checking out a rewritten part of my novel for me, please? I'd like to get some opinions from those who've read the original version of it.
Hi. You said that you're gonna review this so here's the link. - topic78442.html
“(...) and so do all who live to see such times. But that is not for them to decide. All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us.” - Gandalf, The Lord Of The Rings: The Fellowship Of The Ring
Yo. Because of your threats to kill me if I stop posting, I've posted the next part of Stop and Stare. Would you be ever so kind and review it for me? ^^
For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes." — A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett
