sounds poetic, like one of those... proverbs, thats the word. But it also seems to drag out the poetic part of it, perhaps re ordering the sentences, the last sentence seems out of place. 7/10 (i sounded like my dad)
People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear. — John Patrick, The Curious Savage
