I'm going to post and hopefully leave it open for someone. I'll stick her in the courtyard so it isn't specific to male or female. So if anyone needs an in you can use it.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge