There's one thing here that doesn't make sence. How can math be the worst subject ever and still be better than science. You either need to explain that, or find another way of saying it.
Over all, it didn't really catch my interest, and there didn't seem to be much of a point to it. My only suggestion is to explain certain terms like lehenga for those who don't know what that is.
Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"
All truly wise thoughts have been thought already thousands of times; but to make them truly ours, we must think them over again honestly, till they take root in our personal experience. — Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
